posted on November 13, 2003 05:25:08 PM new
OK, last week I posted about low sales in my category and I have taken some advise and made some changes....please tell me what you think now. eBay seller: shamoy
And like before, be gentle with me!
posted on November 13, 2003 05:57:06 PM new
They look great!
This is just my opinion (and we know what those are worth ), but I would consider changing the "I combine shipping" tag you have at the beginning of your auction descriptions. Maybe do a more coordinating color and simpler letterstyle, and center it...just a suggestion. The blue seems to clash with your templates and item descriptions - just looks out of place...and just my opinion...
Other than that - super! You have some great look clothes!
"I have neither the time nor the inclination to explain myself to a man who rises and sleeps under the blanket of the very freedom I provide and then questions the manner in which I provide it." - A Few Good Men
posted on November 13, 2003 07:32:07 PM new
You far outstrip me in the selling department so I offer my comments from the perspective of a woman who loves clothes.
I like the look of your auctions! When I saw the link to see more items in your size, I thought that was a great idea. But I clicked on it (from several of your auctions) and I got an error message (I think it said this page cannot be found).
I have one small nit to pick. I thought the first sentence in your contact info section was too long. You might want to break it up into two sentences. Maybe something like: By bidding on this auction, bidder agrees to contact me by email within three days from auction's end. Please include your name and shipping address in your email. or . . . Winning bidder must email name and shipping address to me within three days of auction's end.
It is really just a small thing, and probably wouldn't make a bit of difference in your sales.
I like all the major elements of your auctions. Titles, pictures, descriptions all look good to me.
posted on November 13, 2003 08:18:11 PM new
What exactly were the changes you made? Looks kinda the same as they did before to me...same background, maybe different templates, am I missing something?
posted on November 13, 2003 11:03:05 PM new
I'd use more light when taking pictures. Your photos are fuzzy. Not so noticeable in the small versions on the auction page but it jumps out at you when supersized.
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posted on November 14, 2003 05:14:23 AM new
I'm not in the market for ladies clothing, at least not at the moment. Your photos are good, I might suggest front & back views of some items, Your ads are formated well easy to read.
But,seem a bit bit long and are touch unfriendly I read them as "I will only do this and nothing more and you must do this or else."
I've been shopping with Mrs Alldings enough to know she likes to try on things and she likes to shop by mail. However, she would never buy clothing by mail that had no clear sizing and no return policy.
posted on November 14, 2003 05:32:12 AM new
Looks Fabulous!
As wgm suggested earlier you may want to... "consider changing the "I combine shipping" tag you have at the beginning of your auction descriptions. Maybe do a more coordinating color"
posted on November 14, 2003 06:03:29 AM new
i have 2 questions,one i had asked before-
would career women buy used office clothes??
also would any women try on used clothes and then return them??
