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 OhMsLucy
 
posted on May 17, 2004 08:18:40 PM new
I love it! She writes a pretty darn good auction, too!

Do wish she'd put in a few paragraph breaks, though.

http://cgi.ebay.com/ws/eBayISAPI.dll?ViewItem&category=2221&item=3723224714&ssPageName=STRK:MEBWA:IT

Lucy

 
 Libra63
 
posted on May 17, 2004 08:52:29 PM new
Wow! It just jumped $25.00 when I was reading her description. It's to the point and it shoulds like she means business. Good for her.

 
 stonecold613
 
posted on May 17, 2004 09:25:43 PM new
Our Maude has been dreadfully shocked to find just how very short the average attention span is; people are just looking at the nice pictures and ignoring the printing, and it is leading to problems.


With the terms written as they are, how can anyone be blamed for passing on the TOS of this sale. Holy cow, split them up a bit.

 
 Roadsmith
 
posted on May 17, 2004 11:30:16 PM new
Lucy: Thanks so much for letting us see this! I wish she lived next door; I'd have her for a best friend. "Wankers who won't pay. . ."

She really should break into paragraphs, though. Very hard on the eyes to read that much. Maybe I'll ask her a question and suggest it.
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 sanmar
 
posted on May 18, 2004 12:39:04 AM new
Lucy, et al. This is such a long TOS that I never got to the end. Why do sellers have to ramble on to try to sell?

 
 grantje
 
posted on May 18, 2004 03:27:51 AM new
But it's such a lovely TOS. While I agree a few line breaks wouldn't hurt, I wish all buyers and sellers could communicate in such a manner. Clearly and with no doubt about why things are they way they are. And this message is sent to the reader with tact intact.

As a dear friend says, "Tact is when you tell someone to go to hell and make them look forward to the trip."
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 alldings
 
posted on May 18, 2004 03:51:43 AM new
With over 4000 fb's Maude has her fans! TOS way to long, hard to read boring,repetitive.
All that gibberish could be boiled down to 4-5 sentances That shoppers might actually read.
 
 capolady
 
posted on May 18, 2004 07:08:21 AM new
Thanks for bringing this to our attention!!

She is great!!

Nothing better than some sarcasm to break up the day.

I would break it up a bit with paragraphs but she shouldn't change one word of the content!!
 
 
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